My web site

[Shorty]

Although I'm fairly computer illiterate, I try to add a little bit to my websites infrequently.

This afternoon, I added a new page dedicated to Persian & Oriental Rugs.

I would appreciate any comments, good or bad, as all comments are constructive.

Here's the link & thank you in advance.

http://www.get.shorty.com.au/persian-oriental-rug-washing

 

[Shorty]

As an aside to the above, while searching for ideas, I came across this.

I have deleted the firms name & area they work.

Funny things you see on the net;

I KID YOU NOT, THIS IS AN ACTUAL PHOTO FROM A WEB SITE UNDERNEATH THE WORDING LISTED BELOW.

In (DELETED) rugs are popular and if you are looking for a rug cleaner you can’t go past (DELETED).

We have specialised rug cleaning treatments designed for even the most delicate and precious rugs.

Give your rugs a new lease on life.

Give your rugs a new lease of life today, call (DELETED) best rug cleaners.

 

[jcooper]

(Imo)Add some rug small photos. Lots of text no ones going to read(good for seo) try to break it up a little.

Your sites real nice, Shorty.

 

[Desk Jockey]

I agree a graphic will make the page more appealing. The text is great though!

 

[Cleanworks]

I agree with the above. Your text is clear and concise but some pics would dress it up nicely.

 

[Shorty]

Thanks for the comments guys.

I'm only just about to get back into rug washing again, have to set-up this week-end.

Then get the rugs to clean.

Then I'll post pics to that page, as I have done with the other pages..


& I sure as hell won't be cleaning rugs on grass.

Unless I'm smoking.

Re my site, I picked the layout, typed up what I wanted and got a friend to set it all up.

Now, (with Wordpress), I'm able to change text around, insert pics & manage it all myself etc;

Just wish I could do better.

I do have two others if anyone cares to comment.

cairnscommercialcarpetcare.com.au

cairnsleathercare.com.au -------------------- This one, UNFORTUNATELY, I cannot change in any way, the tech talk is all to high above my head to understand.

Previously it was the OLD Wordpress, but when it was altered to work on cell phones, it changed completely.

 

[Ron K]

After more than a decade in the care & cleaning of Oriental Rugs, due to health concerns, we were forced to stop washing of Oriental Rugs.

,we were forced to stop THE washing of Oriental Rugs
we were forced to stop washing Oriental Rugs

Maybe it's the queens english?

 

[Shorty]

True blue, ta.

'n just for the record, I'm NOT a Queen.

 

[Ron K]

sorry mate i tweeted that to ya at tree am on the crapper ya no!
never meant for you to be called royalty I was called a pufter biy miy old coach a few times.

 

[todg]

Put phone # @ top of page
Create Call to Action
Picture of your city in background
Larger Text
Break up larger paragraphs with headings like H2 and H3